I've now created an edit from the two shoots, with feedback from Anthony and the class it will help me get down to a final 4, wider shots showing the scene & overgrown landscape are stronger with this narrative than detailed shots. In the second shoot I tried to improve on the shots of the overgrown stand, the newer shots have a much better depth of field that are sharp across the frame and clearly document nature taking over this land. I'd like to include the shot of the gate from the first shoot, this image provides a perspective out from the ground, towards the source of it's destruction and is stronger than some of the other detail shots, The shots of the concrete blocks are different in both shoots too, I prefer the second one because of the low light, cutting across the top of them, the background also includes the clubhouse, which provides context for the location, and combines features of other images, in one.
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